Roaming Shadow

... Im not really sure If I should be here but I write quite a bit but Im to afraid to show my work to friends or family but complete ...

Wow, that's nice. I can never seem to get anatomy right. The only comments I have are that the fingers on his left hand seem a bit long, and I ...

I meant to get to this earlier, but I'm here now, and so I will critique. Interesting little start, and I liked how you ended it as well. The beginning ...

A giudeline to keep in mind is that the future is probobly going to be as strange to us as the past is. Even withoutout a great deal of knowledge, ...

(It happens to all of us.) Victory. I do not kill needlessly, but if there is a need, I will not hesitate to kill. ~Hunter That is a deep question. ...

Hey, I've meshed ideas together. And your plotline is a lot different than mine is. Mine involves spiritual separation during comatose. Funny how you can have two completely different stories ...

This goes hand in hand in hand with character development, but I thought it would work better here. The idea is to take an old (or new if you lack ...

Your idea has some similarities to a story I've been trying to work out, if only in the vaugest sense. With the never ending story thing, you might want to ...

Just as I thought, couldn't even keep track of fighters. They're likely fine, but we missed the landing zone. That's why I'm here. He checked his sensoers as soon as ...

1st part: Uhh, well, I'm really not sure what to say here. The writing seems rather simple, yet this isn't a negative factor, not really. There just doesn't seem to ...

Uhh, I think the better question is do you have any ideas. After all, that's where all writing starts. If you currently don't have a story already in your mind, ...

Thanks Phoenixfire. And thanks Griff, thats a helpful little resource.

Lycaneth sat nearly motionless all through the briefing, then left striaght for his mech as soon as the captian was done. He had never liked the captain, having served under ...

Wolf Hunting by Jane Lindskold. Man, I love that series. They're some of the only books I reread again and again. I really should try her other books.

Sound interesting. I'll give it a shot. Name: Lycaneth Remarius. Rank: Gunnery Sergeant. Description: Short black hair that, though combed back, always seems to look a little scraggly. His eyes ...